Thursday 25 October 2018

✪ MAX MONROE ✪ The Day the Jerk Started Falling ✪ #JerkDuet2 ✪

© Bianca Janeane ✰ 

• 25 October 2018
• Jerk Duet 
• Our ► Review ◄ for book #1

3,75 Stars

My name is Oliver Arsen, but my mates call me Ollie.
I live hard and love harder, and it’s love that usually gets me in the most trouble.

According to the greater population, I’m the ultimate jerk.

My affection tends to be short-liveda quality Ive been assured multiple times by the fairer sex isnt becomingand the leaving part of loving and leaving has always come natural.

At least, it used to.

Until her.

Luciana Wright.

She’s an American bombshell and my sister’s best frienda woman so wrong for
me, it’s written in the waves.

And she’s the reason we’re all here.
The reason I have to go back to explain how it all went wrong.

To the day the jerk started falling.

Eeeep - finally book #2! Phew that was a long-ass waiting-time for this book! ☺
(It was only a week, but still. #OLLIE!)

This time Ollie is talking/writing to us in the podcast. He needs us to hear the story from his POV!
And we start a few hours before he has to go pick up Lucky from the airport in Sydney.
Poor guy. He only got 90 minutes to get used to the idea that his sister's best friend will be traveling around the world with him.
Again we see how Lucky and Ollie do not start their 'thing' with the typical and sweet and funny meet-cute moment. Nope. It's a bit of a hate-at-first-sight thing. But of course there's also this huge attraction simmering in the background - behind all that arguing and hating.☺ But Ollie will tell you all about that and about everything else! ☺



Ollie's POV was just as adorable as Lucky's.
I just wished we would've moved through all the repeating-moments in the first half a bit faster. Not that he repeated all the conversations or anything. It wasn't boring or stupid. I just wanted to get to the point where they get together again in the present time! It was just too long. Half the book was stuff that could've been cute into half or even less! But it was also fun and sweet to read Ollie's thoughts about the whole thing. I definitely loved the second half of the book so much more.

I really adored this series/duet. Everything was so cute and funny and australian-ish and sunny and oceany and travely and surfy and ... OLLIE! (Even though the australian-ness of the book was hugely over the top. In book #1 it was really ok, but Ollie's book! He was like a comedy-comic australian! Very Weird. Blimey!)

Can I get a fanfic kind of spin-off where Ollie and Thatch fall in love?? That would be amazing! ☺

I liked the first book more - it could've done as a longish book instead of a duet - cut a lot of pages and repeats and just make it a dual POV book. I would've loved that much more!
I missed the rest of the travels in the last book too. I was looking forward to Portugal and Hawaii :/
Once they met in Paris it was basically done.
BUT - I still really enjoyed reading those two books! Ollie is adorable! And Lucky is really fun and crazy and ... reading her POVs is really entertaining!

Can't wait to see what will be next by those two author-ladies!

THE DAY THE JERK STARTED FALLING was the almost perfect finale in this amazing Jerk duet! An adorable & funny Podcast-Romance! I just loved it! Hurry to your nearest amazon - Ollie will be sold out in no time!!!

ARC received for an honest review

Oy, how do I write this.
I have been hanging out for Ollie's side of the story, but unfortunately for me, this was a bit of a miss.
 As an Aussie, I praised Max Monroe for not falling into the trap of making Ollie sound like Paul Hogan, throwing another shrimp on the barbie.
Unfortunately in this second part of this duet, they have fallen into the trap.  It is like Crocodile Dundee and Steve Irwin were used as reference material on how Australians speak.

I won't lie, I nearly did DNF this book as it grated on this Aussie ear so much.  What this book really needed was an Aussie beta reader or proof reader who could tell them that "hey, Australian's don't talk like that" and "whoops, you got this saying completely wrong".  Oh, and the blokes and sheilas stuff - just nope.  They most probably won't bother non-Australians but they irritated this one so much.

I did persevere though, and found that the second half of the book was a lot better, a lot less "ockerish" than the first half.

I would have liked more of the present day than the first half of the book being Ollie's retelling of the first book, but this could just be me.
I did enjoy where things went when we got to the present, and I did like Ollie's voice through the podcasts.
So whilst I didn't love it, I did eventually like it.

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Over two years ago, a dynamic duo of romance authors teamed up under the pseudonym Max Monroe, and, well, the rest is history...

Max Monroe is the New York Times and USA Today Bestselling Author of more than ten contemporary romance titles. Favorite writing partners and long time friends, Max and Monroe strive to live and write all the fun, sexy swoon so often missing from their Facebook newsfeed. Sarcastic by nature, their two writing souls feel like they’ve found their other half. This is their most favorite adventure thus far. ​